Englisch-Könner und Irland-Spezialisten gesucht!

[Piraja]

@ Audrey
Piraja, wow, das wär ja der Hammer, wenn das hinhauen würde *Kniefall mach*

Kein Problem.

Sie wird gleich kommen und mal drüber schauen.

 

[Sun]

(NA? Könnt ihr noch mehr mieses Englisch abhaben? JAA? Na dann, voilà
[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]N like Nature[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]In the middle of Ireland there are many lowlands which are defined by little hills.[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]The Shannon is also important in the landscape of Ireland. It flow from the north to the south.[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]The highest mountain in Ireland, the Carrauntoohil, is in the southwest of the isle.[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]Cliffy cliffs at the coasts, wonderful gardens and praks, holdovers from medieval ruins and many things more make Ireland to this wonderful isle.[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]But the vegetation on the green Isle isn't very good. There atr not many forests, just 5% from the isle is forest! In the moors there are also some special plants. But the existence from these plants is menaced because the people are abolishing many turf. So the biotop from these plants is disappearing bit by bit..[/FONT]




[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]Ogham [/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]The Ogam (it's the older Irish) or Ogham ( more new) was used in Ireland and in some western parts of Britain. It was used from the 4[/FONT][FONT=Arial, sans-serif]th[/FONT][FONT=Arial, sans-serif] century to the 6[/FONT][FONT=Arial, sans-serif]th[/FONT][FONT=Arial, sans-serif] century to wrote little textes (e.g. names) on Menhires. [/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]The script got his name by Ogma (or Ogmios), the oldirish god of elocution.[/FONT]


[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]Hehe. was tät ich nur ohne euch?
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EDIT *träller*
[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]Pubs [/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]The Irish Pub is a very important part of Ireland. Here you can meet your friends, drink, talk about god an the world and so on. You can forget your work, you can wait for wonders and you can sing to the folkmusic which is played..short: the pub is good for everything. [/FONT]


[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]Pubs are a kind of tradition in Ireland. But the competition is hard. Themepubs and In-Bars have everything what a young generation want to see. [/FONT]

 

[licia_of_spades]

[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]K like Keating, Ronan[/FONT]

Ronan Patrick John Keating was born at the 3rd March in 1977, in Dublin. His father was the owner of a pub and his mother worked as a coiffeur.
He had three older brothers and one older sister. As a teenager he did athletic sports and he was the national Irish champion on the 200 meter distance and on the 800 meter distance from the kids under 13.
When he was 13 he moved with his parents to Dunshaughlin. There his mother had a own barbershop where he worked sometimes.
He visited the Dushaughlin Community College.
Just one year later he moved to Dunsany. There he spent his time with athletic sports again, but especially with sprinting. He was second in the contests against England, Scotland and Wales.
Around this time, he started taking interest in music and played in different bands. With his second band „Nameste“ he won a talent contest.

And he had to move again, back to Dublin. Besides school he worked as a shoe's seller, but was offered a scholar ship by a famous US college - the same one his brother Gary hat been offered. But unlike Gary, he did not accept it.
At this time he read a advert in a newspaper that there was a casting for singers. He fought against 300 other boys and girls and he won.
In 1994 he took part in the group „Boyzone“. This group was the most popular Irish band for the next years.
At the 2nd February in 1998 his mother died and he left the successful boygroup. He became the manager of another boygroup „Westlife“. And in this year he married Yvonne Connelly. And almost a year later ( 15th March 1999) he became father of his first son, Jack.
At this time he got a „Brit Award“ for his first solo single.
In Los Angeles he began to work at his solo debut „Ronan“. In summer 2000 the sale started and it was a big success. It was sold millionfold, like his single „Life is a rollercoaster“.
In February 2001 his daughter Marie was born and 2005 his son Ali Jo.
Ronan announced the albums „Destinations“, „Turn it on“ and „Bring you home“.
[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]Today he lives with his family in Malahide, near Dublin.


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[Sun]

Danke! Oh man, man merkt, dass Englisch noch nie so mein Fall war..

[VERSTECK]Ich weiß, dass ihr alle eigentlich keine Lust mehr habt *lach*:


[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]Q like Quarter days[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]This days are very important days in the celtic calendar. Thery are important like the solstices and the equinox.[/FONT]
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Samhain – the night from the 31 october to the 1[/FONT][FONT=Arial, sans-serif]st[/FONT][FONT=Arial, sans-serif] november. It's the beginning from the celtic year. Today it's more known as all Hallow's evening (=Halloween).

Imbolc – that's the 1[/FONT][FONT=Arial, sans-serif]st[/FONT][FONT=Arial, sans-serif] february. In Ireland you celebrate St. Bridigs's Day (formerly known as the Godness Brigantia). Imbolc is also a symbol for the begin from the agrarian yea, when the work in the fields and the gardens is beginning after the long winter.

Bealtaine – the 1[/FONT][FONT=Arial, sans-serif]st[/FONT][FONT=Arial, sans-serif] May. There are many different customs. And you have to pay attention that the fairys don't steal your butter!

Lúnasa – that's the 1[/FONT][FONT=Arial, sans-serif]st[/FONT][FONT=Arial, sans-serif] August. It's the old celebration from the god Lugh. People are celebrating this event from region to region different. This celebration is a symbol that every fruits are seasoned.[/FONT]


[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]R like Restaurants [/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]There are many restaurants with national and international [/FONT]gastronomic specialities[FONT=Arial, sans-serif].[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]In pubs you could get pub-grub. Those things are cheap snacks. There are also coffeeshop (grills). That's a combination from a coffeeshop and a barbecue restaurant.[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]There are also other snacks (most of the time in bigger cities) like sandwiches, soups, shrimp cocktails, salats and so on. Like all over the world there are also fastfoodrestaurants. You can buy hamburgers, grilled chicken there. [/FONT]



[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]A traditional irish breakfast include cofee, tea, milk, juice, cornflakes, porridge, eggs in every variations, roasted bacon, sausages, butter, jam, toast, selfmade brown bread and sometimes also kippers ( smoked herrings).[/FONT]



[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]The lunch isn't as rich as the breakfast. Sometimes irish people eat just a sandwich and drink tea.[/FONT]



[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]In the afternoon it's tea time. That's a little but a complete meal.[/FONT]



[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]In the evening it's a dinner with many courses. They drink german or french wines and as an aperitif old sherry, whiskey or gin.

Here are a few examples for the different courses:[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]Starter:[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]Smoked Irish Salmon[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]Seafood Cocktail[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]Egg Mayonaise[/FONT]



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The main dish of Ireland is meat, fresh fish or shellfishs:[/FONT]
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Leg of Lamb with Mint Sauce
Roast Rib of Beef
Gammon Steak
Grilled Sirloin Steak
Fried Fillet of Plaice, Tartare Sauce
Poached or Grilled Salmon

Trimmings:

Brussels Sprouts
Creamed Mushrooms
Celery au Gratin
Carrots Vichy
Creamed Potatoes
Baked Potatoes

Desserts:

Lemon Meringue Pie
Hot Apple Pie with Ice Cream
Fruit Salad with fresh Cream [/FONT]
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[licia_of_spades]

[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]L like Language[/FONT]

[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]In Ireland, Irish is the first official language. And in school, it's a subject as well. But English, which is only the second official language, is the country's main language. By the way: Irish is on of Europe's oldest written language![/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]In 1600 there were as many speakers of Irish as of English. And that worldwide! But today Irish is just spoken in Gaeltacht counties. About 86.000 people live in these areas. They're among the most beautiful regions of Ireland.[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]Some teenagers visit (or are forced to visit) an Irish school during their holidays. In these schools they learn more about the Irish culture, the Irish history and they can improve their Irish.[/FONT]

Zu M:
-it's often played by clowns

Hab' das jetzt schon ganz oft gesehen, deswegen erkläre ich es mal: Wenn etwas von jemandem aktiv getan wird, heißt es "by". Beispiel: "The music was composed by Mozart." (Die Musik wurde von Mozart komponiert.)

"From" nimmt man an allen anderen Stellen, wo "von" hinkommen soll :mrgreen: Hach, ich weiß nicht, wie ich es beschreiben soll :/

 

[Sun]

Bohr, jetzt bin ich fertig *strahl*.

Nur noch alles verbessern ;D

 

[Piraja]

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A like Animals


Animals are everyday life in Ireland. Maybe in fact of the reason that nearly everybody has a dog or that most of the ways through the castles cross a meadow. Yes, that's normal for the animals and the animals are not really interested about the people who cross the meadow.
In Ireland there are also lots of sheeps. And every single place which can be eingezäunt?? is reserved for the sheeps. It's not unusuall that there are a lot of traffic jams because sheeps are often crossing streets.
There are also many cows in Ireland. If you travel in Ireland you have to cross many cow paddocks and sometimes the cows are walking with you. Most of the time there are also horses next to the meadows.
Because there are lots of rivers and seas in Ireland, there are also many frogs and amphibians. It's like a paradise for fishers.
But you won't find many spiders, and not one snake in Ireland. The saga says that St. Patrick ejected the snakes when he saw Ireland, because he didn't want that animal, which is responsible for the relegation from the paradise live on this wonderful isle. He pushed with his stick on the ground and the snakes disappeared.
Some more exotic animals are the dolphins and the atlantic puffins.

B like Books
For such a small isle, Ireland has lots of books which are also well in the world of literature and in all his modes. The irish literature is written in irish and also in english. But the most famous books are written in english. Some famous writers are: Oscar Wilde, James Joyce and the four writers which won a nobel prize: George Bernard Shaw, Samuel Beckett, William Butler Yeats and Seamus Heaney.
The oldest literature traditions are in irish. Irish is the third oldest literature language in Europe (after greekand latin) and the most important body of written literature (old and new version) of any celtic language.



C like celtic tiger
For a long time, Ireland was one of the poorest countries in Western Europe. This period hold on until about 1900 but ten years later everything changed. Ireland became the fastest growing company in Europe because a lot of companies started their buisness in Ireland. And also because new buildings were opening all the time.
Today Ireland is a very important exporter. It's actually the largest European exporter of software and computers.


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Okay. das müsste jetzt bis dahin stimmen. Ich hoffe. dass es nicht so eilig ist; für mehr haben wir im Moment leider keine zeit mehr Ich hoffe; das ist fürs erste okay

Liebe Grüsse.
Piraja

 

[Sun]

In the late 8th century there were many attacks by vikings in Ireland. But the vikings were also interested in business, and they impressed (beeindruckten?) big cities like Dublin, Cork and Waterford.

Nee, ich meinte eigentlich "prägen"...

Oh, wie nett!
Danke Piraja

 

[Anonymus]

A like Animals

Animals are everyday life in Ireland. Maybe in fact of the reason that nearly everybody has a dog or that most of the ways through the castles cross a meadow. Yes, that's normal for the animals and the animals are not really interested about the people who cross the meadow.
In Ireland there are also lots of sheeps. And every single place which can be fenced is reserved for the sheeps. It's not unusual that there are lot's of traffic jams because the sheeps are crossing a street.
There are also many cows in Ireland. If you cross Ireland you have to cross many cow paddocks and sometimes the cows walk with you. Most of the time there are also horses next to the meadows.
Because there are lots of rivers and seas in Ireland, there are also many frogs and amphibians. It's like a paradise for fishers.
But you won't find many spiders and not one snake in Ireland. The saga says that St. Patrick ejected the snakes when he saw Ireland, because he didn't want want an animal, which is responsible for the relegation from the paradise to live on this wonderful isle. He hit his stick on the ground and the snakes disappeared.
Some more exotic animals are the dolphins and the atlantic puffins.

B like Books
For such a small isle Ireland has lots of books which are also named in the world literature in all his modes. The Irish literature is written in Irish and (also) in English. But the most famous books are written in English. Some famous writers are: Oscar Wilde, James Joyce and the four writers which won a nobel prize: George Bernard Shaw, Samuel Beckett, William Butler Yeats and Seamus Heaney.
The oldest literature traditions are in Irish. Ireland has the third oldest literature in Europe (after Greek and Latin) and the most important body of written literature (old and new version) of any Celtic language.



C like celtic tiger
For a long time, Ireland was one of the poorest countries in Western Europe. This period held on until about 1900 but ten years later everything changed. Ireland became the fastest growing company (Firma?) in Europe because a lot of companies started their buisness in Ireland. And also new buildings were opening all the time.
Today Ireland is a very important exporter. Yes, it's actually the largest European exporter of software and computers.



D like dance
It's not really known when the Irish dance starts. Many people thinks that the Irish dance comes from the Celtics but there are references that the druids were the first people who explicated (erklären?) the Irish dance. They danced in religious rituals. In these rituals they dignified the sun and the oak tree.
Today there are also pieces of this ritual dance in the Irish dance (today), but now there are also many other aspects in this dance.
The three maindances are:
Rince fada (or Fading) there are two lines of partners who are standing opposite to each others.
The Irish Hey perhaps a kind of as figurdance ore a kind of a rounddance
The Trenchmores a kind of country dance
The modern dances began at 1893 as the Gealic League has been formed. This group comforted the Irish people to reform the Irish culture which has been prevented by the British people.
The first Ceili was in 1897 in London with a big crowd of people. The Irish word ceili is comes from a connection from neighbours in a house to play music, dance and to tell histories. Today they prepare a Ceili to dance in groups and it's an evening for young and old.

E like Emigration
From 1848 to 1950 over 6 million adults and childs emigrated from Ireland. The most important port of emigration is Cobh where 2.5 million people emigrated from.
[FONT=Times New Roman, serif]All these people emigrated because of poverty, crop failures, the land system and a lack of oppertunity.[/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman, serif]Irish emigration reached unprecedented proportions during the famine as people fled from hunger and disease.[/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman, serif]Many of those famine emigrants went to British North America (today Canada) because there were fare structures and government regulations, but most of the people later went to the United States.[/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman, serif]The famine comes from lots of crop failures from potatoes. So the people thought that it was their last chance to escape from Ireland.[/FONT]

[FONT=Times New Roman, serif]F like Fearies[/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman, serif]There are many sagas in Ireland about fearies. Fearies are all creatures from the „other world“. There are friendly fearies but there are also antipathic fearies in matters of humans. Ostensible people can contact this creatures if they have all their senses by theirselves. Fearies are buisnesspeople because they prey every single fault from people to have a advantage for theirselves.[/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman, serif]Fearies live in bigger groups which are ruled by a feariequeen.These groups wear red and green clothes, lots of jewelery, plumes on their hats and so on.[/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman, serif]But there are also fearies who like coats, animal skins, flowers or moss.[/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman, serif]The life of the fearies is like the life from the people before the industrial revolution. They have to eat, to drink, they could get ill and they could die. Even if they live much longer than humans. [/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman, serif]They like to make a big celebration with singing, dancing and eating. There are four big celebrations: Imbolc, Beltane, Lughnassadh and Samhain. And if they celebrate they hate to be observed by other people. [/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman, serif]They don't want to be known so they disguise themselves as animals and they never say their real names.[/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman, serif]If you want to be friends with fearies you (you) shall not observe them and you should be orderly, you should keep secrets and you should be amply. People who give water to the fearies to wash their kids, gave them milk, bread and cheese are also accepted by the fearies. If you handle unselfish if fearies are in trouble you'll be helped by them, too.[/FONT]
It's not scientifical detected that fearies are existing, but the Irish people are proud of all the stories of these natty little folks.

G like Gaelic Games
Who want to see Irish people in action should visit one of the Gaelic Games. There are different sports like football (with using of your hands), Hurling (a bit like Hockey, with a little hard ball and wooden stocks) and Camogie (that's Hurling for women).


Hurling is a typical Irish sport and almost played in the whole of Ireland. It's one of the fastest teamsports of over the world.
[FONT=Times New Roman, serif]About 70.000 people came and come to the Croke Park to watch one of the biggest Gaelic Games festival in Ireland. Old and young people, women and men, colored ore white – it's a big event for everybody and it's peaceable most of the time.[/FONT]
[FONT=Times New Roman, serif]But it wasn't always popular like that. At the end of the 19th century the Gaelic Games died out. But this decline was stopped by the Gaelic Athletic Association (GAA). So now the games are very popular and despite of an economic downturn in 2009 the attendances are up about 11% in 2008.[/FONT]

[FONT=Times New Roman, serif]H like History [/FONT]
Irelands location in (the) Western Europe and the closeness to Greatbritain marked the history of Ireland.
Ireland has been inhabited for 7.000 years and the isle was opened for many wars. Because of that (there are) many different traditions and people exist in Ireland. The first people were hunters from Greatbritain. At about 3000 before Christ followed countrymen. These people were neolithic people. At about 200 before Chr. Metalworkers came to Ireland.
In the 6th century before Chr. The first celtic people came from Europe to Ireland. Until today there are parts of celtic traditions and (parts of the) celtic language in Ireland.
In the 5th century after Chr. the Christendom fanted out. The people think that St. Patrick (born at about 390) but it's already known that there were prosestant people before. (?)
Ireland was not occupied by the Romans and there were no following invasions or something like that. Probably that's the reason for the wonderful Irish art, the cultural life in Irish abbeys and the history.
In the 8th century after Chr. the Irish friars brought the christendom to many parts of Europe.
In the late 8th century there were many attacks by vikings in Ireland. But the vikings were also interested in buisness and they also impressed big cities like Dublin, Cork and Waterford.
In 1014 the irish people, which were managed by Brian Boru, the Irish king, won a fight against the vikings. And after these fight of Clontarf the vikings disappeared from Ireland more and more.
In the 12th century Ireland was ruled by the British king the first time. This happened, because the anglo-normans shot the Irish kings down and they also destroyed all the proceedings to a feudal state.



[FONT=Times New Roman, serif]The next 400 years the anglo-normans and their kids were very important in Ireland. But most parts of Ireland were in Irish hand. Aside from that, the importance of the anglo-normans disappeared because of the gealic people and because of the Irish monarchs, which came back very strong.[/FONT]



[FONT=Arial, sans-serif][FONT=Times New Roman, serif]I like Irish Folk[/FONT][/FONT]
[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]If you ask (some) german people what they like most of Ireland, then they often say „the music“. But music can be bands and singers like U2, Dana, Westlife and the Dubliners. So you don't really know what they mean. But if you ask them again, they say Irish Folk. But what is Irish Folk? [/FONT]

[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]In general you have to differentiate between traditional music from unknown composists and folkloristic melodies. The traditional music has his beginning in a very unkown past and it was written down much time later. The melodies were brought to the next generation without notes and just with hearing.[/FONT]

[FONT=Arial, sans-serif]This was the beginning of a natural evolution from these melodies because from transfer to transfer parts of the melodies were changing. Like that there were many different versions of the same melody sample. The same happened with the texts. They became a regional cover or they don't really make sense any more.[/FONT]


[FONT=Times New Roman, serif][FONT=Arial, sans-serif]Beside this traditional music there were also other songs which aren't really traditional any more. The word folk song just means that the song is a part of the folk. It doesn't mean that there are traditional instruments ore melodies.[/FONT][/FONT]

Hab jetzt mal so viel korrigiert, wie ich konnte. Manchen Fehler sind warscheinlich nur Flüchtigkeitsfehler, also nichts schlimmes . Wenn ein Wort in Klammern steht heißt das, dass es da nicht hingehört.
Puh, langer Text.

LG

 

[Audrey]

Ihr lieben eifrigen Korrigierer - ich finde ihr solltet in Sunshines (!) Interesse drauf achten, daß das nicht zu perfekt ist. Ihr Lehrer wird sie kennen, er wird wissen daß Sunshines Englisch halt einfach nicht das allerbeste ist...

 

[Anonymus]

Also ich weiß ja nicht, wie sehr die Note gezählt wird (ich denke mal, du bekommst dafür eine Note, oder?), aber ich würde als Lehrer bei so einer großen Arbeit schon erwarten, dass der Schüler wenigstens die Rechtschreibung korrigiert hat. Die meisten Fehler sind ja auch Flüchtigkeits- und Wiederholungsfehler, also kein Drama.
Und nicht, dass sie dann vielleicht eine ein bisschen schlechtere Note bekommt, nur, weil sie den Text nicht korrigiert hat/korrigieren hat lassen.

 

[licia_of_spades]

Wo sich eben Zehennägel bei "sheeps" gekräuselt haben, kräuseln sie sich mir gerade bei "fishers" :mrgreen: Gibt es so im Plural nicht, höchstens "fishermen" ^^

Und weil ich gerade auch nicht mehr schaffe, habe ich auch noch eine Bitte an all euch eifrige Helferlein: Achtet doch bitte drauf, dass das, was ihr da verbessert, auch so stimmt

Zumindest die Rechtschreibung ist ja wohl einheitlich, sun ist immerhin nicht damit geholfen, wenn drei verschiedene Leute drei verschiedene Sachen schreiben, gell?

 

[Audrey]

Und weil ich gerade auch nicht mehr schaffe, habe ich auch noch eine Bitte an all euch eifrige Helferlein: Achtet doch bitte drauf, dass das, was ihr da verbessert, auch so stimmt

Zumindest die Rechtschreibung ist ja wohl einheitlich, sun ist immerhin nicht damit geholfen, wenn drei verschiedene Leute drei verschiedene Sachen schreiben, gell?

Das stimmt - mir ist grad irgendwo noch ein korrigiertes "unusuall" aufgefallen - sorry, das heißt unusual, mit einem "l".

Sunshine, an Deiner Stelle würd ich das dann eh nochmal in Word einsetzen und da die Sprache auf englisch stellen, und mal schaun was so unterringelt wird....

 

[Anonymus]

Ich hab das in Eile gemacht.
Und dass man unusual mit einem "l" schreibt, ist für alle, glaube ich, verständlich. Mir ging es hauptsächlich um Bum beispiel ganze Satzzusammenhänge, die falsch waren. Oder welche, bei denen ich den zusammenhang gar nicht versatnden habe. Auch nach Nachschlagen der Wörter.
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EDIT (automatische Beitragszusammenführung):
Außerdem würde ich für ein paar Wörter ein Synonym suchen, das auch jeder versteht. Wenn es nur für den Lehrer ist, ist es vielleicht noch ok, aber wenn das eine Präsentation für die ganze Klasse werden soll, versteht keiner etwas, langweilen sich und hören nicht zu. Und der Text ist ja ziemlich lang und noch nciht einmal fertig. Daswürde ich auch kürzen. 1-2 Sätze pro Buchstabe sollten da reichen. Sonst hört dir am Ende gar keiner mehr zu und das wäre ja schade und würde deine Note vielleicht negativ beeinflussen.

 

[Piraja]

Ihr lieben eifrigen Korrigierer - ich finde ihr solltet in Sunshines (!) Interesse drauf achten, daß das nicht zu perfekt ist. Ihr Lehrer wird sie kennen, er wird wissen daß Sunshines Englisch halt einfach nicht das allerbeste ist...

So viel musste laut Austauschschülerin gar nicht korrigiert werden, nur Kleinigkeiten. Oft auch Widerholungsfehler, dass z.B. statt many fälschlicherweise much geschrieben wurde.
Aber der Lehrer kann sich seinen Teil auch denken. Fast jeder Schüler sucht bei solchen Hausarbeiten Rat, nutzt den Übersetzer im Internet usw..
Und ihr Englisch ist gut.


Ach ja, den Teil, den Ella korrigiert hast, solltest du mit deinem Ausgangstext vergleichen, da sie an 3 Stellen einfach einen Artickel weg"gestrichen" hatte, da dieser einfach überflüssig war, allerdings hat sie dann nichts mehr fett gemacht.

 

[suno]

Hy....ich finde es toll wie ihr beim Englisch helft...allerdings ist der Inhalt des Werkes an sich nochmal eine Überarbeitung Wert.

Mir scheint Sunshine (nicht böse gemeint) hat einiges im Kontext gar nicht wirklich verstanden...ein kleines Beispiel (und es gibt einige inhaltliche Unstimmigkeiten...)

C like celtic tiger...wird die These aufgestellt, daß seit 1910 die Industrie wächst und Irland "reich" macht.....

das widerlegt sie selbst unter

E like Emigration...
From 1848 to 1950 over 6 million adults and childs (= children!!) emigrated from Ireland......

In der sie beschreibt, daß die Iren vor Armut und Hunger geflohen sind.

Als Lehrer wären mir ein paar Grammatik und Rechtschreibfehler mehr lieber, als das Gefühl der Schüler / Schülerin hat den gesamten Inhalten nicht verstanden....und nur alles irgendwoher zusammen gewürfelt.

 

[Sun]

So, erstmal Danke an euch!
Mist, fishers >.< ...


Ich weiß nicht, ich hab es so gut wie's geht übersetzen.
Ich dachte (bei dem Bsp), dass es schon so war, dass zu der Zeit viele auswanderten. Sie könnten ja auch wieder zurückeinwandern, wenn es Irland wieder besser ginge. So hab ich das jetzt aufgefasst. Aber ehrlich gesagt hab ich ehrlich gesagt nicht besonders viel Lust, alles nochmal machen zu müssen. Da bleib ich lieber bei meiner nicht ganz perfekten Grammatik/Rechtschreibung..
ich will für das ganze (ja, es gibt ne Note) keine 1*****, ich wär schon mit einer 3 superzufrieden. Normalerweise bin ich wirklich ne Niete in Englisch... merkt man ja..
Klar, dass eine 1*** schon toll wäre, aber soviel will ich gar nicht von mir erwarten..
Blub.
Sun